Verse 1 G, Bm, C, G,
Gazing from the bed
Sheets around my legs
Sunrise overhead
I wake up like this
Stealing one more kiss
From someone I wont miss
Pre Em, C, G, D
Oh oh, Capture this moment I’ll sneak a photo before I go
Oh oh, you make me delete it, but I wanna keep it so I can show
Chorus C, G, D x2
Oh oh oh a smile
Oh oh oh in time
C B? Bb? Am7 Bb? Am7 G
And even if we don’t remember
Nothing in this worlds forever
You and I can feel the pleasure here
Verse 2
Walking down the road
A face that stops me cold
Memories of old
Blurry history
Falling to my knees
I’m strong and I am weak
Pre
Oh oh, to capture this moment, we take a photo before you go
Oh oh, You look a bit older, I lean on your shoulder so I can show
Chorus
Verse 3
Guess that’s how it goes
You will never know
Who will come and go
Brushing out my hair
No sense to compare
Who we were back then
Pre
Oh oh, to capture this moment I’ll take a photo before I go
Oh oh, no need to delete it, this time l keep it so I can show
Chorus
And even if we don’t remember
Nothing in this worlds forever
You and I can feel the pleasure here
All desire to measure disappears
Good vocal and guitar. Needs more depth of backing
Good beat throughout to play with on this one – makes me think of travelliing throughout the day told in the song.
Great song. Good melody and lyrics. I think it works well with just voice and guitar, but maybe could use some subtle strings here and there.
Really like this song. Have you tried it on piano? With strings and a bass I can hear Adele in there. It shows a different side to your writing, a very cool pop ballad.
Starts superbly. The verses are great. So is the first line of the chorus. The rest is a little anticlimactic to me. Again, I don’t think it needs much accompaniment. Maybe a flute or clarinet in a bridge just before the third verse.
Works really well as is so will be great for live performance. Shows off vocal range well and love the progression at end of chorus. For recording possibly some gentle strings in chorus but for me less is more.
Love this. You make a very intricate melody sound sooo simple. I was engaged from start to finish. It’s a strong song that can have either a simple folk arrangement or even a more contemporary pop production.