Very good up-tempo pop single. Like the chorus – and your pitch. Would like to hear a more strident, dynamic instrumental backing on the chorus (though I can’t think what). But another cracking track, superbly illustrating your versatility, both as a singer and writer.
This is my favourite track. So catchy, can definitely hear this on the radio. Love the staccato guitar riff and how you switch into falsetto for the chorus, it makes the chorus jump out. After you repeat Once In A Lifetime and before the backing drops out it could take a short electric guitar solo, though not especially necessary. Agree with Neville about the chorus, it could do with some dynamics like a slightly over driven electic guitar. Taylor Swifts You Belong To Me has a very similar structure.
Excellant – very commercial and radio friendly. Although subtle I enjoyed the lift to the chorus and the band drop out towards the end. I wrote a screed on fade outs for my MA but to be honest I still think they are a cop out. Try a dead stop on “Once in a life time,” or possibly a band stop just before with “Once in a life” sung a cappella.
This is a really great simple pop song not trying to be anything other. It’s very hard to do actually so hats off. Whether that suits the Saskia brand I’m not so sure though. I think if it was to be included in the final cut you should be mindful of the production and be careful not go down an Olivia Newton John ‘Xanadu’ vibe.
Good vocal, high tempo song. Like the percussion
Great song. Very catchy. Good production too,
Definitely a single track, this one!
Very good up-tempo pop single. Like the chorus – and your pitch. Would like to hear a more strident, dynamic instrumental backing on the chorus (though I can’t think what). But another cracking track, superbly illustrating your versatility, both as a singer and writer.
Loving the vocals and arrangement on this. There’s little ai would change.
This is my favourite track. So catchy, can definitely hear this on the radio. Love the staccato guitar riff and how you switch into falsetto for the chorus, it makes the chorus jump out. After you repeat Once In A Lifetime and before the backing drops out it could take a short electric guitar solo, though not especially necessary. Agree with Neville about the chorus, it could do with some dynamics like a slightly over driven electic guitar. Taylor Swifts You Belong To Me has a very similar structure.
Nice and catchy sound.
This would add variety to the album
Great dance track. The fade-out at the end was unexpected, though. Have you tried a chord finish?
Excellant – very commercial and radio friendly. Although subtle I enjoyed the lift to the chorus and the band drop out towards the end. I wrote a screed on fade outs for my MA but to be honest I still think they are a cop out. Try a dead stop on “Once in a life time,” or possibly a band stop just before with “Once in a life” sung a cappella.
This is a really great simple pop song not trying to be anything other. It’s very hard to do actually so hats off. Whether that suits the Saskia brand I’m not so sure though. I think if it was to be included in the final cut you should be mindful of the production and be careful not go down an Olivia Newton John ‘Xanadu’ vibe.