Chorus E, Bm, A, E
It’s the sourdough season
And I’m make believing
That you are next to me

I am sitting here kneading
Through the dough in my kitchen
And I wanna be, with you

Post Chorus E, Bm, A, E
Right now
Watch it rise

Verse 1 E, Bm, A, E
We spent a long summer
Getting to know each other
We spent a lot of years apart

I don’t know where this will take me
I don’t know if it will last
You’re an unanswered question in my heart

Pre-Chorus F#m, C#m, A, B
And I know the worlds been mean to you
A terrifying scream to you
An endless void of needing you
To make their chaos meaningful

Chorus

Bridge C#m, F#, A, B, C#m, F#, A, B
I’m washing up, when I feel, your arms around my waist
I dry my hands on a tea towel and then I turn to touch your face

Verse 2 E, Bm, A, E
You see the seasons are changing
Autumns coming on
I’d really like to invite you home

We’ll spend all October baking
Right here on my boat
_ Let’s turn the winter warm

Pre-Chorus 2 F#m, C#m, A, B
And I know that you’ve been dealing with
A narcissistic influence
And every kind of violence
But there’s an ending to that storm, now

9 Responses

  1. Something about this one stayed with me! Has a sunny, country-style vibe, can see a violin in the background working.

  2. Not a standout track to me – although I quite like the rhythm of the chorus… and good move to have it right at the beginning. Not sure the rest of the song does it justice, though. Again, maybe clever instrumentation will provide that missing link.

  3. I like the feel and vibe of this song however the lyric, though clever, was rather deep. From a commercial perspective perhaps a little too personal.

  4. I love the song structure uplifting melody and the really really infections vocal and I think this has the basis to be a hit. However, the lyrics are clearly personal and I think the notion of baking, washing up and tea towels is too light weight and saccharine and not sure it hits the mark as a metaphor either (though actually I think you mean it literally). Personally I would change all the lyrics because the rest is so darn good it would be wasted. The holy grail of song writing is the melody and you’ve completely nailed it here and it’s worth trying a different lyric. (Sorry I know that sounds brutal but I want to be honest).

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